很多孩子写“去旅行”，只会写 I went to… It was fun.中考要的是：去了哪里 → 看到了什么 → 有什么感受 → 为什么难忘。这一篇我们学Places & Travel（地点与出行），一步一步把“旅行流水账”升级成“高分表达”。
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学习路径指引
适用年级：八年级 本篇核心能力目标： 描写地点与交通方式 叙述一次出行经历 用原因和感受丰富内容 建议学习顺序： ① 找出短文中的地点、交通、感受 ② 学会描述风景与体验的句型 ③ 背会核心表达 ④ 仿写自己的旅行经历2
英文原文
🌍 A Trip to Hangzhou
展开剩余87%Last summer, I went to Hangzhou with my parents. We traveled there by high-speed train, which was fast and comfortable. It only took us two hours to arrive.
Hangzhou is famous for West Lake. The water was clear, and the trees around it were green and beautiful. We walked along the lake and took many photos. I felt relaxed while enjoying the fresh air and peaceful views.
During the trip, we also tried local food. The dishes were delicious, especially the sweet fish and fresh vegetables. Besides, the people there were friendly and always ready to help us.
In my opinion, Hangzhou is a wonderful place to visit. It is not only full of natural beauty, but also rich in culture. The trip was meaningful and unforgettable, and I hope I can visit it again one day.
中文翻译
去年夏天，我和父母一起去了杭州。我们乘坐高铁去那里，又快又舒服，只花了两个小时就到了。
杭州因西湖而闻名。湖水清澈，周围的树木又绿又美。我们沿着湖边散步，还拍了很多照片。在欣赏清新空气和宁静风景时，我感到非常放松。
在旅行中，我们还品尝了当地的食物。这些菜很好吃，尤其是甜鱼和新鲜蔬菜。此外，当地的人也很友好，总是乐于帮助我们。
在我看来，杭州是一个非常值得去的地方。它不仅有美丽的自然风景，还有丰富的文化。这次旅行既有意义又难忘，我希望有一天还能再去。
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核心词汇与高频短语
travel(v./n.) 旅行 We traveled there by high-speed train. 替换：go on a trip / take a journey / tour high-speed train(n.) 高铁 We went by high-speed train. 替换：bullet train / fast train / express train famous for(phr.) 因……而著名 Hangzhou is famous for West Lake. 替换：well-known for / known for / popular for clear(adj.) 清澈的 The water was clear. 替换：clean / bright / pure beautiful(adj.) 美丽的 The trees were beautiful. 替换：pretty / lovely / attractive walk along(phr.) 沿着……走 We walked along the lake. 替换：walk beside / go along / walk around relaxed(adj.) 放松的 I felt relaxed. 替换：calm / comfortable / peaceful fresh air(n.) 新鲜空气 I enjoyed the fresh air. 替换：clean air / cool air / natural air local food(n.) 当地食物 We tried local food. 替换：local dishes / local meals / traditional food friendly(adj.) 友好的 The people were friendly. 替换：kind / warm / nice in my opinion(phr.) 在我看来 In my opinion, Hangzhou is wonderful. 替换：I think / I believe / as far as I know meaningful(adj.) 有意义的 The trip was meaningful. 替换：valuable / important / worthwhile unforgettable(adj.) 难忘的 It was unforgettable. 替换：memorable / special / impressive4
重点句型拆解（中考高频）
① We traveled there by high-speed train, which was fast and comfortable.
结构：主句 + which 引导的定语从句 考点：which 指代前面整件事 模板： …, which was + 评价.② Hangzhou is famous for West Lake.
结构：be famous for 考点：地点描写高频 模板： … is famous for …③ I felt relaxed while enjoying the fresh air.
结构：while + doing 考点：时间状语从句 模板： I felt … while doing …④ It is not only full of natural beauty, but also rich in culture.
结构：not only…but also… 考点：并列结构 模板： It is not only …, but also …5
语法精讲
✅ 核心语法点：not only … but also …
用于强调两点
It is not only beautiful, but also meaningful.⚠ 易错点：for / to 混用
❌ famous to
✅ famous for
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写作迁移任务
✍ 写作话题
Write about a place you have visited
📌 可用句
I went to … by … It is famous for … I felt … while … It is not only … but also …📝 仿写练习
写一段 80–100 词 的短文，介绍你去过的一个地方，
要求使用 至少 3 个 本文表达或句型。
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